Friday, 7 September 2018

Moment in time

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous1 November 2018 at 09:30

    Hey Sasha😉

    My name is Caisha, I love playing netball. My favourite position is(Goal Shot). I love Athletics, my most favourite sport is Shot put and Discus. I love hanging out at the beach with my Whanau.🌼

    I love your Moment in Time, Great paragraphs and amazing WOW words.🌺

    I loved how you described the bright yellow sand.🌊

    Next time make sure you have a W.A.L.T and a explanation😊
    come visit my blog...http://pcscaishat.blogspot.com/

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  2. Anonymous6 December 2018 at 12:18


    Hi my name is Mackenzie and I’m from Marshland School. I liked the way you described the waves crashing on the side of the boat.
    This reminded me of when I go out boating.
    I think that next time you could add a bit more at the end so we could hear what happens next. But I really liked your post.
    Why did you decided to write this?

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